Friday, February 25, 2011

round and
round i go
and
i keep
coming back
to this
fucking door but
i still
don't see it

2 Comments:

Blogger Ilia said...

got to love the door!
standing there
mighty and tall
as if laughing
in your face
open me, it cries
while remaining an
obstacle that although
was designed to be used to access
ones inner sanctum
is in fact now
not to be moved
even a little
.
and yet.
finding the door itself is hard enough
locating it within the
vacuum that surrounds and hides it.
What will you do now?
Now that in front of it
you stand
alone...
with yourself
and the door
Do you really want to go in?
Are you ready to see
what lies on the other side?
once you go through
there is no going back
Its a decision
a choice
not for the weak hearted
detirmine your own self
Are you Man?

3:55 am, February 27, 2011  
Blogger Moo said...

Wow.
I love this blog within a blog thing.
Poetic replies to a poem.

Deep!

4:46 pm, April 30, 2011  

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