Friday, October 05, 2007

croak

i open
my mouth
to utter
an
orchid
but instead
an artichoke
unfolds
like some muddy
rose
from my uvula
and
i just
croak.

2 Comments:

Blogger joocy said...

hello my inspiration, you!
i had to google "uvula".. bloody med jargons >_<

9:54 pm, October 07, 2007  
Blogger Ilia said...

Dude!

u should be punish-ed.

who? uses uvula? in a poem?

dude- r u secrerly an ENT/ORL surgeon?

when was the last time u saw??? a uvula?

dude.

Artichoke indeed.

Great poem otherwise.

Peaze out

5:02 am, October 24, 2007  

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