Sunday, October 14, 2007

driving meditation

driving
through the
pellets of
rain

under a bridge
an instant of

stillness.

4 Comments:

Blogger Ilia said...

Dude.

u forgot to use the word oropharynx!

Like.... i dont know... "under a bridge - like a pallated over the oral cavity - an instant of stillnes" ????

work on ur poemical skillzzzz
they are madddddd!!!

Dude.

5:04 am, October 24, 2007  
Blogger Ilia said...

Dude.

Pellets is a funny word.

10:55 pm, October 25, 2007  
Blogger joocy said...

do u noe what i think of when i hear pellets?

*moth-balls*

indeed, i is going insane

5:36 pm, October 30, 2007  
Blogger SuperDha said...

hehehe.. good thing i'm going to become a psychiatrist! :)

11:55 pm, October 30, 2007  

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