Sunday, January 20, 2008

anniversary ironing meditation

a hearth
within me flickers
its warm wings like
some butterfly of
yellow love polka
dots
on a lavender twilight
sky.

the iron hisses
over shirts, one
two
three.

eyes squint out
the creases;
a finger still throbs
from yesterday's cricket
under the sun;
ears make a symphony
of cacophany - cars
hum waves outside,
lou armstrong drones from
the bedroom and the clouds
forget fingers of rain that now
tap a piano ballad
outside;
tastebuds still lie in a dreamworld
after a romance with
a steamboat;
nostrils breathe in
freshly ironed cotton,
and as feet realise that
carpet fibres can
sing, hands move
like an artist's,
banishing crease after
crease from
this moment.

this must be
what they call

love.

this must be
what they call

bliss.

it has been three
hundred and sixty
five days
of
pure
wonder.


thank
you
j.

9 Comments:

Blogger Ilia said...

Dude.

that was really beautiful.

.....

Oh.
And you had a typo at the end :-)
But still, - you are welcome :-)

9:51 am, January 23, 2008  
Blogger SuperDha said...

ho ho!

hehe thanx big buoy... i am pretty sure i meant j, not i.

hang on let me check..

...

yeah i meant i, not j. but thank you too Great ilia. you rock-stttt!

12:39 pm, January 23, 2008  
Blogger Moo said...

i'm having a romance with cashew nuts and ice green tea rite now!

its cool how you're hyperaware ironing eh.

its like me in the shower

8:00 pm, January 23, 2008  
Blogger joocy said...

>_< big buoy! dun feel left out~
Soon, in May, th 7th(ur grad day last yr), we'll hav our Open relationship 1st anniversary, init ;) shud hit Nippon :P

moomoo.. romance wi cashewnuts...
haha

7:41 pm, January 24, 2008  
Blogger Ilia said...

I think this poem and blog needs an update...

and Moo... wats up with hyperawareness in the shower? ha?

dude - inappropriate - there may be kids reading this blog!

3:26 am, March 08, 2008  
Blogger Ilia said...

shaga!

4:11 am, March 10, 2008  
Blogger Ilia said...

Sha ga ga ga!!!

2:39 am, March 12, 2008  
Blogger joocy said...

dhams, i think ilia is getting frustrated enough after waiting how long.. for CocoBear to dedicate a long promised sonnet for polar bear!

I feel ya, big buoy~
Love hurts init!

>_<

8:51 am, March 12, 2008  
Blogger Ilia said...

Its not a sonnet that i want :-)

its time to update this hall of poetry!

Its time to shake things up a little!

Move it and shake it!

Shaga!

7:26 pm, March 17, 2008  

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